I loooove the MS Paint job haha. Couple of edits and suggestions:
Step 2 - Just because it's not in the list doesn't mean you can't donate for it. If what you want isn't in the list, you can send a PM to larva asking for a price.
Step 7 - Always PM larva. Sending a PM to a GM won't do any good until larva has approved of your donation. None of us can see for sure that the donation has come through. Once larva indicates that the donation has been received, any GM can hand out the donated items.
Side note on step 8... Only chuk adds your items to your inventory while you are offline. Serverus, Xceptional, Protoss, myself, and any other GM will only redeem in game. I'm not special enough to have write access to edit people's inventory. Only chuk does that.