Violie Posted May 21, 2014 Share Posted May 21, 2014 (edited) A friend encouraged me to create this topic. I gotta say I'm not into poetry at all, though I used to be, but that was way back in my teens. I thought since we have an art section where people post their drawings, why not have a topic where people post their poems or other creative stuff? Guess I'll go first to give you a basic idea. This is an old one I wrote back in 2010: (please note that English isn't my first language so I had to translate this one, it no longer rhymes) I in the dark with cold in my heart am waiting in pain for a better time My love for you is hidden well My grief awakens the darkness in me Well... now it's your turn! Edited May 21, 2014 by Violie 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akioyamato Posted May 21, 2014 Share Posted May 21, 2014 Just out of curiosity, What would it have looked like? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyane Posted May 21, 2014 Share Posted May 21, 2014 (edited) Roses are red Violets aren't blue this poem sucks but I like you Do haiku! Edited May 21, 2014 by cyane 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fyrewolf5 Posted May 21, 2014 Share Posted May 21, 2014 You should really put the original in there too along with the translation, poetry doesn't ever translate without taking a lot of creative liberties, und ich wuerde es gerne in deutsch lesen xD. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Violie Posted May 21, 2014 Author Share Posted May 21, 2014 Okay... here's the original Ich in der Dunkelheit mit Kälte im Herzen warte mit Schmerzen auf eine bessere Zeit Meine Liebe zu dir habe ich gut versteckt Meine Trauer erweckt die Dunkelheit in mir 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armando Posted May 21, 2014 Share Posted May 21, 2014 Armando is love Armando is life What are you Just a noob #ShakespearInTheFlesh 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gmredencion Posted May 21, 2014 Share Posted May 21, 2014 (edited) There was a Delsaber who lived in the ruins and the spaceship who was bitch who was strong stubborn selfish but loyal to his kin he never dropped my guld so he floating in hell now Edited May 21, 2014 by gmredencion 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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