rioshima Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 (edited) So here's a recent song i've thought up, now I make these things in like 10 seconds, i type extremly fast as some of you may have noticed. Tell me what you think. ( I'm willing to sing/rap/read them out-loud on skype <3) My rhythm, and flow is undecided XD. Song 1: ( Instrumental to Eminem-Lose Yourself) No mistake BY. Undecided Cause Fate is a mistaken? not a gate to a way, to be payed, for the smiles on your face on the day, we all have eachother, and if you had no brothers, than look around you, that answer, here pick another of a birth but whats it worth, i've sworn worst, and seen worst, but whats better, to this letter, is that we all reminisce, and life becomes dence, soon along becomes a feather. or life becomes a haze, and the fuzz cuts your gaze, and soon you lose your way, so grasp onto another we all have eachother, and if you had no mother than darn-well i'll be your brother we all have eachother, and if you had no father, than look towards the sky, because god gave your charter, and that sure aint a lie So that you can live, and not strive, you can smile, and not cry, you go for days, and survive tough days, so you can live, and not strive, you can smile, and not cry, you could go for days, and survive the devil's plague. (Eminem) : You better lose yourself in the music, the moment, the wont it, than you better never let it go, you only get 1 shot, do not miss your chance to blow, Oppurtunity comes once in a life time. Rap Update #2: Swag Bear BY. Undecided Cause Inspired from: http://sccarl.wordpr...10/purple-bear/ T.I: Ready for Whatever (Instrumental) ( Not my video) Talking: " Yea, I'm a purple bear, why dontcha come give me a pet and I'll take your arm in 1 bite i bet, Im not barnie so get your sh** striaght you come into this cage and that'll be the end of your days, ha ha!. ( Rap Hook starts at... 0:52-ends at)Verse 1: So imma that kinda bear, that'll have you staring in amazement,Tallest walking around on 2 legs you gasping in amazement,Petrified's not the word,Im just 8 feet tall, which means your lucky this cage is smaller than your basement.Call me Mr. grape i got that furr that make dat money rainInside of this cage isn't prison you shouldnt complainOutside of this cage I'd eat hell just about everybody, and everythingOh was that your child i ate, he tasted like mom's homemade chicken-WangsDont mistake me for a polar-bear, though my hearts as cold the world isLock me inside this cage and tell me that you killed my kids,cry when i ate your son, now you think you get a special privledge?I say nah I just got even, and a free dinner all in 1 package.(Song Verse Remixed) Even though my head's to the sky, im planning on this pavement, highly walking around you people staring in amazement, take another another step and hell kid your done with, Better grab him momma or he'll be my sunday morn breakfeast,I'm Purple now and forever, and nothing's going to change this, Oh yes pull that release lever, and than i can just end this, all of you look like little chickens, and Im the master of the hen pen, soon as i get my hands on 1 of you than hell its Thanks Giving again.Big swag bear, my tail flowing in this faint wind, mistake me for something cute, and You'll be staring death in the face ina minute, Stretched behind these bars I don't mind if you watch me sleeping, just keep that gay fag zoo keeper from poking me up the butt calling it medicine. (Comedy finish LOL) Edited May 9, 2012 by rioshima Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeppaKat Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 SWAG..SWAG..SWAG Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rioshima Posted May 9, 2012 Author Share Posted May 9, 2012 (edited) ( Sorry for Double Post. SIKE!) Poetry Update #1: Name: With no Sanity By: UnDecided Cause -Anthony.M.Franklin- Moods+Emotions behind this poem: Curiosity, Hate, Love, Pity, Despair, Power-hunger,Controlling,Sadist A heart works in more than 2 ways light and dark, does not control us everyday An insane mind can be much more complex, Yet, a sane mind could never be perfect, I could write you examples but would you reminiscence yet, i know you would leave them hidden, in the back of your mind like your dead pets A thought or 2 controls a indecisive mood, yet 1 thought more can cause a brain storm inside of you, why do we over think, why can we not choose? without sanity, do you still think im made in the same image as you? Do we discriminate another? our sisters? or brothers? Do we learn to hate our Creators? God, our fathers? and mothers? Do we only grow old to think negative thoughts, as the devil's puppets? Do we all let insane thoughts engulf our emotions so we have an excuse to say that we do not love it? Answer 1 question yet never tell a lie? if this is true than why do you seem insane? such an noticeable twitch in your eye Why Do you blink when i ask you do you love me? What Do you think when someone asks do you hate me? How would you define the words patience, and bravery? How would you resolve the world's daily confrontations with no sanity? Purpose of this poem is. can you Confront yourself with issues of life that people claim will turn a normal human-being insane. Loss of loved ones, hatred of your superiors, anger towards a negative influence in your life. * After reading this don't forge to post in the topic. New Rap Coming SOON!: Swag bear By. Undecided Cause Edited May 9, 2012 by rioshima Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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