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So here's a recent song i've thought up, now I make these things in like 10 seconds, i type extremly fast as some of you may have noticed. Tell me what you think. ( I'm willing to sing/rap/read them out-loud on skype <3) My rhythm, and flow is undecided XD. Song 1: ( Instrumental to Eminem-Lose Yourself) No mistake BY. Undecided Cause Fate is a mistaken? not a gate to a way, to be payed, for the smiles on your face on the day, we all have eachother, and if you had no brothers, than look around you, that answer, here pick another of a birth but whats it worth, i've sworn worst, and seen worst, but whats better, to this letter, is that we all reminisce, and life becomes dence, soon along becomes a feather. or life becomes a haze, and the fuzz cuts your gaze, and soon you lose your way, so grasp onto another we all have eachother, and if you had no mother than darn-well i'll be your brother we all have eachother, and if you had no father, than look towards the sky, because god gave your charter, and that sure aint a lie So that you can live, and not strive, you can smile, and not cry, you go for days, and survive tough days, so you can live, and not strive, you can smile, and not cry, you could go for days, and survive the devil's plague. (Eminem) : You better lose yourself in the music, the moment, the wont it, than you better never let it go, you only get 1 shot, do not miss your chance to blow, Oppurtunity comes once in a life time. Rap Update #2: Swag Bear BY. Undecided Cause Inspired from: http://sccarl.wordpr...10/purple-bear/ T.I: Ready for Whatever (Instrumental) ( Not my video) Talking: " Yea, I'm a purple bear, why dontcha come give me a pet and I'll take your arm in 1 bite i bet, Im not barnie so get your sh** striaght you come into this cage and that'll be the end of your days, ha ha!. ( Rap Hook starts at... 0:52-ends at) Verse 1: So imma that kinda bear, that'll have you staring in amazement, Tallest walking around on 2 legs you gasping in amazement, Petrified's not the word, Im just 8 feet tall, which means your lucky this cage is smaller than your basement. Call me Mr. grape i got that furr that make dat money rain Inside of this cage isn't prison you shouldnt complain Outside of this cage I'd eat hell just about everybody, and everything Oh was that your child i ate, he tasted like mom's homemade chicken-Wangs Dont mistake me for a polar-bear, though my hearts as cold the world is Lock me inside this cage and tell me that you killed my kids, cry when i ate your son, now you think you get a special privledge? I say nah I just got even, and a free dinner all in 1 package. (Song Verse Remixed) Even though my head's to the sky, im planning on this pavement, highly walking around you people staring in amazement, take another another step and hell kid your done with, Better grab him momma or he'll be my sunday morn breakfeast, I'm Purple now and forever, and nothing's going to change this, Oh yes pull that release lever, and than i can just end this, all of you look like little chickens, and Im the master of the hen pen, soon as i get my hands on 1 of you than hell its Thanks Giving again. Big swag bear, my tail flowing in this faint wind, mistake me for something cute, and You'll be staring death in the face ina minute, Stretched behind these bars I don't mind if you watch me sleeping, just keep that gay fag zoo keeper from poking me up the butt calling it medicine. (Comedy finish LOL)